Friday, September 10, 2010

Short Story with Vocabulary

One day in while clod winter there was a girl named Andy. She went out with her friends to see The Last Exociste she was very excited to see the movie but when the movie was over she felt grievance. When leaving the thearter the people were ballyhoo.She closed her ears and kept walking but when her friend departed from her when walking home she was abducted by aliains. When in the U.F.O the alians were zany and pratying. After she got though with partying with them they let her go and she had to sneack back in the house, but when going back home she droped a neckless that was relic. When she got home she finally realized that it was gone. She look around her room and she started to panic. The next morning her friends found her neckless and she jumped up in joy she was so happy and at the end zany herself.

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  2. Bella, some vocabulary words are not used correctly. Please proofread and edit your work before posting it. Errors like the ones in this post are costing you points.

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