Wednesday, September 8, 2010

The Pedestrians's post (Prompt A)

I bealive that in the year of 2058 when the cop car took Mr. Bradbury to the building the building was probrably dark when he got there. I bealive that the building was more high tech when he went inside and that there were big machines that had electricity. When Mr. Brabury went inside he probrably had to sit on a chair and connect some cables in him and wear a helmet and start the electricity. after that was all done there were maby some little migets that conrolled inside and hepled him choose a wife. Maby after that he was free to go with a wife and he stayed inside his house and wont come out no more.

1 comment:

  1. Bella, you need to proofread and edit your work before you post it! Ask a peer or an adult to help you with that. You will continue to lose points by making these errors. :(

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