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In the story " The Highwayman" and "Typhoid both girls die.

Typhoid Fever - Present tense Childhood Memory

I am 12 years old and I was in bed when I hear a loud noise coming from the stairs. I walk up the stairs and no one is there. I go to to my little twin brothers room to see if they are awake. I'm shocked to see what I have seen my mouth jaw drops in seconds. My mother and step dad are having inter course with my brothers in the room. I cant believe it I grab clothes to change my brothers and take them out. My mind has so many thought in it at this point. I am not sure what to do but the main thing was to take my brothers out of the room. I take them downstairs and change them. I head to the kitchen to make them some break feast and leave them in the living room watching Disney Chanel. I'm still shocked and in disbelief. My mother takes me outside and asks me why I was up there. I explained my reasons and let her know " You are the most disgusting person I have ever met in my life." She beats me till she is tired and I am left on that cold garage cement floor bleeding and crying not able to rise and stand with pride.

"The Cold Equation" from Marilyn's Point of View

I don't know what I was doing. All I wanted was to see my brother. I promised my momma and daddy that I would go back. My brother was in a plant called Wooden. I really wanted to see him so I hopped on an EDS. I saw a sign I read it and said “ Unauthorized personal keep out.” I knew I would be breaking some kind of regulation. I thought I had to pay a fine or something related to that matter but I was wrong. I was hiding in a closet. I thought no one would find me and I would make it safe there. When unexpectedly a man named Branton caught me. He thought I was a man or at least wished I was. He said it would have made his job way easier for him. I was a stellaway and I was not supposed to be there. I was in big trouble! I had to die because I was taking up there fuel and slowed down there shipping, at least that was what was mentioned. I was scared and I wheeped. I tried to convince Mr.Branton but he said he couldn't help me all I could do was write to my momma and daddy. I asked if I were able to say goodbye to my brother he dialed as I waited. "Don't feel like that, don't let me go knowing you feel like that" I said "He tried to help me Gerry, your fading out Gerry"....."Maybe I'll come to you in your dreams with my hair braided and crying because my kitten died or maybe I will be the touch of the breeze that whispers to you when it goes by.... think of me like that Gerry always like that and not the other way".....these were the words I had to tell my brother before I was gone "Goodbye Gerry"...and as the words came out of his mouth with the last good bye from him I hung up and got ready for my death. I was no longer afraid but happy to be able to speak to my brother one last time. In my heart I new this wasn’t an official goodbye and I would see him agian but hopefully not to soon.

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"The Storyteller" from Another Point of View

Hi my name is Bertha. I am the most behaved young girl in my whole country and lots of the girls hate me because of it. I have medals for many achievements that I have completed. Lots of people admire me because of my goodness. There was a park that no one was able to go to.. basically out of bounds. The prince gave me an invite because he believed I deserved it. I was able to go and it was the most beautiful park ever. There were black and white fat pigs they were filthy but adorable. I was enjoying my time walking around taking a look at the amazing animals. I heard a noise and as I looked back there was a wolf right behind me. I was afraid I did not know what to do so I ran and hid behind a bush. I heard the steps and crushing of the leaves on the floor I shrugged. The beautiful medals that I had on my dress clinked against each other. The wolf heard me and pulled me out of the bushes at that point with no one around I new no one was going to help me and my life was about to end.

I love this Song!!

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"My Plot Diagram"

"The Storyteller" Memorable Books from My Childhood

1.Winnie the Pooh
2. Are you My Mommy
3. The Spider
4.The Cat in the Hat


Once upon a time there was a little egg in a nest all lonley and left with noone around when it would hatch. The mother was no where to be found when the little bird hatched. The little bird was scared and wondered were his mom was so he left the nest and when exploring for his mommy. He whent to a bear, eagle, worm butterfly and many others. All of them said no I am not your mommy. The bird was looking for his mommy still and finally gave up when he whent back to his nest and said are you my mommy and the big bird said " Yes Im your mommy." The story ended great.

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First-Person Point of view
Today I was planning on tripping everyone in the cafe because I was borred. I never liked any of these kids because the were all better then me. The line was super long and so I decided I wanted to be picky. There is no food that apitises me so I said I did not want anything. I kept getting food and putting it back because I thought it was funny. I dropped all the food that I was offered and made a hudge mess while standing in line. The cook gave me a broom and dust pan to clean all the food on the floor up a I refused to pick it up for about five minutes. I finally picked it up after he mentioned telling the principle.

Third-Person Point of View
Today Bella was planing on tripping everyone in the cafe because she was borred. She never liked any of the kids because she thought they were better then her. The line was super long to her so she decided to be picky with the food offfered. Everything that she refused it. She kept getting food and setting it back because she thought it was funny. She dropped all the food that she was offered and made a hudge mess while standing in line. When the cook gave her a broom and dust pan. She was supposed to clean up all the mess but she refused to clean it all up herself. She refused for about five minutes until finally after someone mentioned to tell the principle she thought she would pick it all up before she got sniched on.

Omnicient
One day in a white shiny cafeteria not a mouse you could be able to hear because of the noise the kids would make. There was a long long line and all the kids were hungry shuving and pushing to get there food.

Essay Reflection Paragraph

I really liked the essay that I wrote for Ms. Priester's English 10 class. I believe that I did really well describing my personal characters and detailing my story. As well as the way I put certain sentences and statements that were said back and forth from my mother to me. I also liked the way I wrote about the weapons I was hurt with because I described them very well. Including the way I translated them from Spanish to English with the exception of one because I did not know what it would be called in English. I personally though it was pretty unique and catchy. I think that next time I wright a paper/essay I need to make sure that I really spell check my work better and get at least a little more into the translations. Besides that I believe my paper was great, it was suspenseful, sad and very interesting. When it comes to my writing I think Ms. Priester and I have come a vary long way. This is only my sophomore year and I have learned so much. As long as she keeps doing what she is doing. I am not very sure what it is but it's worked for me. I am moving along well I will hope for it to continue.
P.S Thank you Ms. Priester your awesome

"Chilean Miner Rescue"

Sympathy! That is what I feel when I hear about this story. I believe that they were very strong I waiting for someone to rescue them. I would have never wanted to be in that position. Being trapped underground to the anxiety of their waiting families that were probably super worried. I just simply could not live with the thought or ever simply imagine having that feeling or being in that position in there shoes. The reason why I feel such sympathy is because of the thought of the pain they each and every one of them were going through while being stuck underground not knowing if anyone would save them or know they were their. I was very glad to hear that they were all safe and sound and in the process of getting rescued.

Here is a link for you to check out: http://www.theepochtimes.com/n2/content/view/44261/

Autobiographical Narrative Final Draft

My Table

My voki

Bell's Autobiographical Narrative Form

This is the form to evaluate my paper.

Caught and Shoked/Caught in the Act Autobiographical Nararative Prewright

https://docs3.google.com/document/edit?id=19HJQ79Kzh5UtE54Vzvz4tawRasE_hJFB9-p5S9s9cPA&hl=en#

"My Memoriable Days"

1: When I was 10 my aunt left my sister and I in tj at my moms house with out letting us know.
2:When I was 14 in a half my sister brought me back to san diego and left me with a foster mom.
3: Throuth out the time that I came back to San Diego I moved to polinsky I had my first bf named Abraham.
4: When I was 15 I moved from Catc to San Pasqual Academy.
5: The Day I actually celebrated my Birthday I turn 16 in Spa.
6: While I was livinging in my mother's house 10-14 I missed 5 years of school.
7: Before my lead staff left Spa to move to Oregon I was 16 I gave her bubbles in her stomach and she had never laughter that hard in over 2 years she expressed.
8: When I was on Awall I would sleep on the streets and every once in a while smoke pot etc.
9: When I was 12 I caught my mom and step dad having intercourse in their room in front of my little twin brothers.
10: When I was in elementrary school in Los Angeles I used to love annoying my little sister.

"My Teams Character Plot Test Results"

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Vocab To Practice:
Four ways of Speech
Subordinate charcter
Protagonist
Dialoug
Plot